Monday, April 7, 2014

Looking for an editor? Check them out very carefully!

 by Jodie Renner, editor, author, speaker

An incident happened to me recently that got me thinking about all the pitfalls that aspiring authors face today when seeking professional assistance to get their books polished and ready to self-publish or send to agents.

Most of us know about the vanity publishers who can easily take thousands or even tens of thousands of dollars to prepare and publish your novel, whether it’s well-written and marketable or not – they don’t care, as long as they get your money.

But what about other publishing consultants and editors? There are lots of excellent, highly reputable editors and consultants out there, but unfortunately there are also some poseurs, predators, and plagiarizers. I found that out firsthand about a week ago, and it made me worry about all the unsuspecting aspiring authors who are getting taken in by sites posing as experts in editing or publishing.

If you’re self-publishing or trying to get your book ready to send to agents, scroll down for some concrete tips for finding a creditable, competent, knowledgeable freelance editor for your book.

Here’s my recent story: A writer I’d never met contacted me on March 28 to tell me that a website, WordWorks Publishing Consultants, had plagiarized a bunch of testimonials from my website HERE and changed the names and is passing them off as reviews of HER editing HERE. I was shocked and angry. I'd worked damn hard to deserve those testimonials, and my clients had put in time and effort to compose them!

I told Preditors & Editors about it, and someone on Facebook suggested I contact Victoria Strauss of Writer Beware about the offending website. The name Pamela Wray rang a bell for Victoria, who researched this website and person further and found out that the pilfering of my testimonials was just the tip of the iceberg - most of the "accomplishments" and claims on that site are fraudulent. Victoria wrote an excellent expose of the site HERE. I also wrote about it briefly HERE on Crime Fiction Collective. (I’ve taken lots of screen shots, but I see the site is still up there, unchanged, today - over a week later.)

ALL of the testimonials under “Editing” on that website are lifted verbatim from my website, with only my name replaced by hers, and the names of my clients LJ Sellers, Allan Leverone, A.M. Khalifa, and Tom Combs replaced by fictitious clients of hers, including Random House and "Simon & Shuster" (her spelling for Simon and Schuster)! 

And under “Writing and Content,” she has testimonials from big names like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs, among others! As if! If she did, she’d be making big bucks and her website wouldn’t be so cheesy-looking, and she’d be able to afford a proofreader to fix the myriad of typos and grammatical errors throughout the site – not good for someone advertising as an editor with 38 years of experience! 

For example, under "Editorial Services" it says "We boasts more than thirty eight years of...experience". Besides the "we boasts" (which sounds like a non-native English speaker to me), it should be "thirty-eight," with a hyphen.


And can you pick out the grammatical error and the formatting error within the first three words of the bio of this “editor”?


Among other "accomplishments," Pamela Wray claims to have written and published 62 books (and ghost-written another 60), yet a search on Amazon.com reveals only 2 amateurish-looking children’s books under that name, and those are co-written.

And I can't help but wonder about the spelling “Pame” (rhyming with “shame”) instead of “Pam” as a nickname for Pamela, especially for an editor. Hmmm... 

Unfortunately, not every aspiring author will notice all the errors in this website or have the time to do the research, as did Victoria Strauss and others who responded with additional info in the comments under her expose. So a lot of hopeful writers may not realize that a great many of Pamela Wray Biron’s claims are false. It angers me that many trusting writers will be taken in and could lose - or have lost - a lot of money, for either poor editing or no editing at all.

Here are some tips for weeding out incompetent or fraudulent editors for your manuscript:

1. Read their websites over carefully. Wild, exaggerated claims should be a red flag! For example, in that fraudulent site, besides the so-called testimonials from Bill Gates, etc., huge publishers like Random House and Simon & Schuster don’t use freelance editors – they have their own in-house editors. Nor would they write that kind of personalized testimonial, as if from the author.

2. Check for strong English writing skills on the websites. If spelling and grammar aren’t your strong suits, have someone who’s got an eagle eye for typos and grammatical errors comb the websites for you.

3. If you’re looking for an editor for your novel or short story, check to be sure they know about current effective fiction techniques such as plot, pacing, character arc, point of view, natural-sounding dialogue, and showing instead of telling.

There’s no point in paying for a basic copyedit or proofread of a whole manuscript, when it may need a developmental, content, and/or stylistic edit and significant revisions first. Entire chapters may need to be deleted, condensed, or significantly altered to make the story stronger, so it would be a waste of money to get the whole manuscript proofread before it’s been analyzed by an expert in fiction writing, or at least by a savvy critique group. After you’ve had “big picture” advice and completed the content and stylistic revisions, you can then get the final draft checked over by a basic proofreader at a lower rate.

3. Get references or follow through on the names listed under their testimonials. I link to the author’s website or other contact info under my testimonials so potential clients can click through to their websites, blogs, or Facebook pages, and contact them if they wish.

4. Contact at least 3-4 potential editors and ask for sample edits of your work. Don’t accept a pre-prepared sample edit of some other person’s document. Who knows who actually edited it? And I would never share a sample edit from a previous client’s work! Nobody wants their original errors and the corrections up on somebody’s website or sent out for others to see! 

Get a sample edit of at least the first 5-10 pages of your manuscript, even if you have to pay for it. Then ask someone you trust who’s knowledgeable in English grammar and spelling as well as effective fiction techniques to check it over. Or contact an established editor to check over the sample edit for you. Better to pay $25-$50 or so upfront to establish the competence of the editor than to pay hundreds or thousands of dollars for a poor edit – or no edit at all! I’ve heard horror stories of writers paying thousands of dollars and it’s a year later and they still haven’t received any edits. 

5. Don’t pay large amounts of money upfront – not even for half of the job, unless you’re absolutely certain of the competence, dedication, and integrity of the editor. Sure, pay a small fee in advance for a sample edit – it’s money well-spent and could save you a lot more – but not a large sum to a basically unknown editor.

My method is to edit in sections, with each section going back and forth a few (or sometimes many) times, and my clients pay me in instalments as we go along. That way if it’s not working out for either party, if we’re just not on the same page, we can part ways, and nobody owes anybody anything.

Bottom line: be sure to do your homework before parting with your hard-earned money and entrusting your valued manuscript to an editor! 

And click HERE for my article with advice for finding and attracting top-notch, highly in-demand freelance editors. 

And by the way, if you're looking for tips for ramping up your story to create a real page-turner, check out my webinar, “Spark up Your Story – Adding Tension, Suspense, & Intrigue” live on Friday at this Cyber Symposium.

Also, my next slot here, in two weeks, falls on the week I'm moving across the country, so bestselling thriller writer and writing-craft speaker Robert Dugoni will be filling in for me here.

Jodie Renner has published two books to date in her series, An Editor’s Guide to Writing Compelling Fiction: Writing a Killer Thriller and Fire up Your Fiction (Style That Sizzles & Pacing for Power), which has won two book awards so far. Look for the third book in the series, Captivate Your Readers, out in late 2014. For more info, please visit Jodie’s author website or editor website, her other blogs, Crime Fiction Collective and Resources for Writers, or find her on Facebook, Twitter, and Google+. And sign up for her newsletter.

27 comments:

  1. Oh, you must be so peeved. I would want this wonderwoman wannabe hung and quartered.

    I noticed a lack of pictures of Ms. Wray (change the letters around - Wary) anywhere on her site. Maybe that's not unusual but I'd like to think I would've been suspicious enough to pass on this. Not entirely sure, though.

    Thanks for posting this, Jodie. Still amazes me how diabolic, devious, and downright lazy some people can be. There must be some legal action that can be taken? Some way to track this person down? Through the website host?

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    1. Amanda, I'm in the middle of getting ready to move across the country in two weeks and present a webinar on Friday, so I just haven't had time to follow through on this. I'd appreciate everyone helping me get the word out, or even contact their website host for me. As much as this shocked and angered me, the real victims are writers who contact her (if it is a "her") through this site.

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  2. Wow...can't believe this Pam person had the cujones to do this. But then again, I shouldn't be surprised. Crooks have always been lurking out there, ready to prey on the hopeful. This is an important caveat emptor to all writers. When we self-pubbed our back list titles in ebook, we first tried to copyedit ourselves then realized we needed a pro, so we hired a trusted retired editor we knew. There are some really good editors working out there now and the best advice I can think of is to get references from fellow authors.

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    1. Yes, that's absolutely the best way to find a reputable editor - by word of mouth from fellow authors. Unfortunately, a lot of people just starting out as writers don't know a lot of other writers and haven't connected with any on social media yet - they're kind of on their own, googling for an editor.

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  3. PJ - Your author reference suggestion worked for me. I followed the lead of TKZ's Joe Moore. He referenced Jodie as his editor. I was lucky enough to get her to work with me.
    IMO your suggestion is on target - there's no better endorsement than from a fellow writer.

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    1. Tom, I get most of my writer clients through referrals from other authors or repeat business. For example, I've edited 4 of LJ Sellers' books, and the only reason I didn't edit her latest thriller (not out yet) is that I was already booked for a second book edit with Joe Moore & Lynn Sholes for that same time slot, and both were rush jobs.

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  4. Thanks, Jodie. Excellent post. I have to admit I am just as amused as I am horrified. Under "Meet the Staff" she (if it is a she) also apparently forgot to mention that she is Wonder Woman on her time off! Good gravy, that bio is just ridiculous.

    This is the Internet. People need to be WARY and do their research for anything. Remember that New Yorker cartoon? "On the Internet, nobody knows you're a dog."

    But anybody who simply does a quick search for reviews of that company will find a bunch of articles slamming it, including this one. So, kudos to you.

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    1. Thanks, Eric. My fear is that there are lots of new, perhaps naïve aspiring authors who aren't savvy enough to do a search for reviews of that company - or to notice the poor quality of their website and all the mistakes!

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  5. Jodie - what a horror story! I fear there are lots of writers out there who could easily fall prey to this kind of thing. Thanks for getting the word out. I've never used a freelance editor - just had ones at my publisher and my poor long suffering agent:) Your story reinforces the need to research a prospective editor very carefully indeed!

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    1. Thanks, Clare. I hope you and all the TKZers and readers will help spread the word about this predator!

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  6. Thanks for the info!! Hugs on this happening to you!!

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  7. Also beware of writing coaches! When I first decided to write, I found one who taught me all she knew for a large price. I only found out later that she didn't know much... :(

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    1. Another sad story, Jennifer. I'm sorry that happened to you. Seems all aspiring authors could use a few real experts in the biz that they can call on to check credentials when needed.

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  8. Still waiting for someone to tell me the formatting error and grammatical error within the first 3 words of this person's bio... Anyone?

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    1. Ha! I thought that question was rhetorical. It's the comma and the un-italicized P that done it! By themselves they would be fine, but you should never have both within the first three words! ;-)

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  9. Great post, Jodie! I'm sure I've heard that person's name before somewhere. As to the errors,the first letter of her name is not italicized while the rest of it is. There should not be a comma after Wray.

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    1. You got it, Peggy! A real editor might have accidentally messed up on the formatting, but they wouldn't have put a comma after the name when describing themselves - or anyone else.

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  10. This is so horrible, Jodie! I am so sorry this happened to you! There are so many flimflam artists out there. (That is my favorite word of the day today). I would be happy to get the word out. I will put it up on my Facebook page and tweet it for you. Many of my followers, (most, maybe I should say) are new and aspiring authors and should definitely see this. Thanks for getting the word out!

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    1. Thanks so much for getting the word out about this scam artist, Rebecca! New writers need all the help they can get with this confusing and scary process!

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  11. Thanks for sharing this, Jodie.

    Also, congratulations to The Kill Zone for making Writer's Digest's 16th Annual 101 Best Websites for Writers. My newest issue (May/June 2014) just arrived and I was pleased to see you guys under the "Thriller" category.

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    1. Thanks, Cate! And I'm "thrilled" and honored to be part of this award-winning group! :-)

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    2. I saw this too! I will add my congratulations as well! :)

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  12. Jodie, I heard about this on Facebook. I know I'm naive, but I can't believe this happened to you. Thanks for the great tips.

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  13. It also looks like she lifted her 5 Different Types of Editors list from CareerBear - word for word.

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  14. Thanks for laying this out here, Jodie. It is beyond my imagination that people do scams like this on writers. I'm not going to call out any "name brand" organizations (with employees that call you on the phone and send emails), but they are certainly out there. I find it amazing that there are writers falling for this baloney. I thought "We" were smarter and hipper than that. Hmmm. Appeals to vanity must work like a charm. Often, anyone can fall victim to a scam by just trying to be helpful. Think about the "kindly" old lady that ran the criminal enterprise on Justified.

    This should be the focus of one of our thriller novels, where the writer wreaks revenge upon the scammer, a la The Twilight Zone. Now why doesn't spellchecker like "scammer"? And does that question mark belong inside or outside the quote?

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  15. Disgusting. But it would still be a small comfort to be confident these abuses were confined to bottom feeders, and that due diligence could protect writers. Except this is not always the case. I was scammed out of plenty by a smooth-talking big-name marketer, someone gifted at convincing hopeful writers like me she could and would work wonders. So big a name, in fact, that fear of slimy legal action to shut me up prevents me from mentioning her by name.

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